The maps demonstrate the transformation of Islip from now to its development. Overall, a small town has experienced significant changes with the central areas which become more morden with the introduction of facility while many structures were demolished and replaced. A town centre now had two housings which were opposite and two shops were connected by main road. The countryside was located on the north site of the maps and school which is closed to the main road was on the west south . Next, the park was placed in the main road which wasn't finished. Islip's planned development had a dual carriageway surrounding the entire central area and. There were 4 housings which include two original housings and two new housings. While there weren't changes in two housing, two new facilities are added, one was near the car park which is constructed and one was next to the park which is shrank. In addition, the main road was turned into pesdestrian only. Shops which were near the housing remain unchanged while shops were next to the main road are expanded to shopping centre. Moreover, the bus station was built beside the dual carriageway.
Detail Sampel
The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
19/07/2026 08:34 5.0 skor
Topik
The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Jumlah kata: 194
Grafik/Diagram

Essay
Skor Keseluruhan
5.0±0.5
Dasar
Skor Kriteria Writing
TA6.0
CC5.0
LR5.0
GRA5.0
Task Achievement6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:1
Coherence & Cohesion5.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:3
Lexical Resource5.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:6
Grammar & Accuracy5.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:0
Klik teks yang ditandai di esai untuk melihat saran detail untuk peningkatan.
Analisis mendalam
Task 1 - Academic Writing
4 tools available
Esai contoh - IELTS Writing Task 1
Belum ada esai contoh
Silakan klik tombol di bawah untuk menganalisis dan membuat esai contoh berkualitas tinggi untuk Task 1.
