There is a widespread belief that schools need innovate currently academic knowledges to practical skills like cooking and managing money. +From my perspective, I disagree with this opinion.
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Some people think schools should teach practical skills such as cooking and managing money instead of traditional academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think schools should teach practical skills such as cooking and managing money instead of traditional academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Changing the curriculum from teaching academic to practical skills can bridge the gap between theory and practice, and help students gain hands-on experience for their career paths in the future. Firstly, many students can not apply knowledge that they studied in the schools to the real world, while their spend a lot of time and try on to study. For example, even a best student in a class of academic subjects, he can lack of practical skills such as managing time, communicating, ect. Secondly, students acquired soft skills can develop their career opportunities more than other students. Because they have times to practice in their school, they can easily to manage their life.+
However, I disagree with the opinion that teaching practical skills replace tradition academic knowledge. The tradition of teaching academic subjects which provides the essential skills for lifelong learning. For instance, studying mathematics, sciences, physics, ect which improves and develops the analytics skill, critical thinking, problem-solving skill,ect.+
Conclusion
+In conclusion, I disagree with the statement to replace the academic subjects to practical skills because of the necessary of the traditional academic subjects are well-rounded in students' brains and future chances.
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