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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

19/07/2026 09:54 5.5 skor

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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart provides information about the proportion of males aged 16-25-year-old group in a specific nation who enjoy watching sports to others who prefer engaging in them. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of sports watchers are almost higher than the figure for sports participants, except for fishing. Notably, people who enjoy joining in fishing take up the highest share while the number of football players is the lowest. First of all, people who prefer watching football and horse riding and racing account for the same figure, at about 45% while those who enjoy participate in these sports only take up 10% and 18% respectively. Furthermore, the proportions of watchers in rugby and badminton are nearly the same, at 30% and 28% respectively. On the other hand, the percentage of fishing watchers is the highest during the figure shown, at 50% while the figure for participants in this sport is the lowest, at only 15%. In addition, the number of people who prefer joining in basketball and badminton shares the same figure, at 25 approximately.

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