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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

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The diagram illustrates the proportion of male adults from 16 to 25 years old in a specific nation who enjoyed watching sports and males who prefered to participate in sports. Overall, football, horse riding and racing witnessed the highest percentages of male audiences, dominating the number of players, whereas fishing fishing maintained the largest portion of actual participants. Focusing on soccer, horse riding and sportfishing, the figures for the two sports had similarities in patterns with 45% of watchers in both categories, while that the data for participants was only 10% and about 18% respectively. Regarding the information about fising, there was only 15% of mature males watching videos about this topic, while half of the nation's men who were interested in fishing actually went to take part in the sport. In terms of rugby and badminton, those two physical activities experienced the same pattern with approximately 30% for both sports, whereas the participatied individuals took up about 20% and 25% of the total enjoyers respectively. Finally, the graph for basketball showed that around 37% of the male spectators only observed matches from outside the pitch and 35% were actual athletes.

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