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The line graph below provide information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010. Summary the information, write at least 150 words.

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The line graph below provide information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010. Summary the information, write at least 150 words.

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The given line graph illustrates the profit of four different restaurants in a city within 2010. Overall, the incomes of Grand Fiestar, Evening Paradise and Delicacy experienced an upward trend, while the opposite was true for Spicy Fortune. In addition, Spicy Fortune remained the most earned restaurant until it was surpassed by 3 remaining restaurants in the last 3 months of the year 2010. Firstly, the noticeable decline was seen in the revenue of Spicy Fortune, whereas the figure for Evening Paradise went up significantly over the period shown. To be more specific, the figures for Spicy Fortune stood at exactly 160,000 dollars, while Evening Paradise was at a lower point, at approximately 50,000 dollars. Over the next 9-month period, despite some fluctuation, the revenue of Spicy Fortune experienced a slow decrease. Conversely, the figures for Evening Paradise witnessed a slight increase, before matching Spicy Fortune at around 105,000 dollars. The gap widened further in the last 2 months, the income of Spicy Fortune fell rapidly from 105,000 dollars in the matching point to around 50,000 dollars in Dec; however, the figure for Evening Paradise surged to about 170,000 dollars, emerging into the most profitable restaurant over the period examined. Regarding to the rest of restaurants, both of them witnessed a moderate rise over the period. The earning of Delicacy in the first year was lower than that of Grand Fiesta, which was around 30,000 dollars and 100,000 dollars respectively. Within 11 months after, Grand Fiestar’s earning also recovered steadily, finishing at the second-highest grade, despite a marginall fall in the middle of the period. Notably, the income of Delicacy restaurant skyrocketed to nearly 60,000 dollars in October and then ended strongly at 120,000 dollars.

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