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Topic: the tendency of new reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

19/07/2026 10:16 5.5 skor

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Topic: the tendency of new reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Introduction

It is undeniable that the tendency of news reoports ịn the media to focus on negative than on positive developments is harmful to people in the world. In this essay will discuss about my opinion of this topic.

Body

On the one hand, focusing on negative news reports too much caused detrimental effects ton both individuals and society. People who constant exposure to problems and emgiencies such as war, criminal, accidents can feel stress, anxiety or fear. In addition, they can lead to the decline belief of the government and social associations. For instance, in covid 19 pandemic, many people exhausted, worries and they lose their belief on the state when there are various dead.

On the other hand, problems and emergencies play a crucial role in preventing about social benefits. These news reports contribute to cautions citizens about some of the risks, dangerous that help them have prevention’s methods. Furthermore, they attraction to social issues that unsolved from the government and action’s associated. However, these benefits just remain when the traditional to equality rather than focusing on bad news reports too much.Tuy nhiên những lợi ích này chỉ phát huy khi truyền thống duy trì sự cân bằng thay vì quá chú trọng vào các tin tức tiêu cực

Conclusion

In conclusion, I believe that showing more negative news than positive news offers both advantages and disadvantages to individuals and society in a whole.

Skor Keseluruhan

5.5±0.5

Dasar

Skor Kriteria Writing

TR6.0
CC6.0
LR5.0
GRA5.0
Task Response6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Coherence & Cohesion6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:2
Lexical Resource5.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:4
Grammar & Accuracy5.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:18

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