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The diagram below shows the usual process a person must go through when applying for a driving license in one state in the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons.

19/07/2026 10:13 6.5 points

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The diagram below shows the usual process a person must go through when applying for a driving license in one state in the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons.

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The flow-chart illustrates the sequential stages an applicant must navigate to obtain a driving licence in on American state. Overall, the procedure comprises eight different steps in total, beginning with visiting the Licence Centre and ending when the driving test is taken successfully. There are two compulsory assessments including a vision check and both written and practical examinations. Except for preparation and registration steps, the remaining stages require repetition if failure occurs. Initially, the applicants attend the Licence Centre and complete a form of application. Subsequently, an eye test is done, success allows progression whereas failure results in no licence being issued. Those who pass must pay the fee after that, without that they can not go further to the next examinations. In the fifth step, applicants sit a written knowledge test. an unsuccessful outcome obliges them to retake it until a pass is achieved. And the most important driving test can decide whether people should have a licence or not according to the result of this test. If they pass, a licence is obtained but if they fail, the applicant have to return to the fee-payment and do both theoretical and practical test still following the previous rules.

Overall Scores

6.5±0.5

Fair

Writing Criteria Scores

TA7.0
CC7.0
LR7.0
GRA6.0
Task Achievement7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Lexical Resource7.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:2
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Errors:0

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