Detail Sampel

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

19/07/2026 10:21 6.0 skor

Topik

Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Jumlah kata: 294

Introduction

Opinions are didvided on whether some individuals believe that intelligent machines play a crucial role in developing human progress. While some others believe that Ai-powered systems pose potential risks on communities. I believe this trend has several disadvantages.

Body

One significant benefit of this development is its positive impact on human’s future development. The main reason is AI can perform automate repetitive task, allowing businesses and individuals to reduce human errors. An additional reason is that robots can perform complex task with greater accuracy. This enables factories and firms to improve productivity and efficiency. For this reason it can analyse enormous amounts of data, which supports workers in demanding industries, contributing to technological advancement. For instance, hospitals increasingly use robotic surgical systems to assist doctors in performing highly complicated operations with greater precision, leading to higher success rates and faster patient recovery.

On the other hand, some people believe that this development has some drawbacks should not be overlooked. The primary reason is that artificial intelligent can replace human workers, leading to unemployment opportunities, and it is more likely to have downward trends on society in long-term development. Furthermore, individuals struggle to find alternative jobs and widen income inequality among the word. Hence, many people become increasingly dependent on technology, contributing to create long-term problems. This can be illustrated by self-driving trucks may eventually replace thousands of professional drivers, leaving many workers unemployed and increasing financial insecurity among low-skilled families. Therefore, AI can bring certain advantages to human’ future progress, but i believe this advancement contains harmful benefits on human’s development.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although robots can improve productivity and enhance people's quality of life. I believe that people should not be overlooked about this advancements because it can cause potential risks to society in long-term.

Skor Keseluruhan

6.0±0.5

Cukup

Skor Kriteria Writing

TR6.0
CC7.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0
Task Response6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:3
Coherence & Cohesion7.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:1
Lexical Resource6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:5
Grammar & Accuracy6.0
Target: 7.0
Kesalahan:16

Klik teks yang ditandai di esai untuk melihat saran detail untuk peningkatan.

Analisis mendalam

Task 2 - Essay Writing

5 tools available

Task 2 - Esai contoh

Esai contoh skor tinggi dengan analisis struktur untuk topik yang diberikan.

Belum ada esai contoh

Silakan klik tombol di bawah untuk menganalisis dan membuat esai contoh berkualitas tinggi untuk topik Anda.