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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

19/07/2026 10:26 7.0 skor

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The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men aged 16-25 who prefer watching sports to the others who prefer participating in sports across six categories in a particular country. Upon examining the data, it is noticeable that watching consistently recorded higher figures than participating across almost all categories, with fishing standing out as the only category in which participating exceeded watching. Additionally, the figures for two groups considerably disparity across most categories. To begin with, football exhibited the greatest disparity, with the figure for watching accounting for roughly 45%, compared with just 10% of indviduals who took part. Similar patterns were observed in horse riding and racing (45% versus 18%) and basketball (well below 40% versus approximately 25%). Turning to the remaining categories, fishing emerged as the only category in which the share of participating outstripped that of watching, with the former repsresenting 50% and the latter making up almost 15%. Conversely, rugby reported the opposite pattern, which the figure for watching exceeded that of participating. The corresponding figures for those were 30% and 20%, in the order given. Similar patterns were observed in badminton (almsot 30% versus around 25%).

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