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In the technology era, people who lives in metropolitan area have to deal with plenty of issues in the daily routines. ＋This essay will discuss these problems and I believe that governments should encourage them to move to smaller regional towns.

There are a large number of issues which lead to this. Firstly, the living cost is higher and higher everyday such as rent inflation or high fresh food cost while unemployment rate also increased partly because megacities are overcrowded. For example the population density of Ha Noi, a capital of Viet Nam, is 2620 people per square kilometers. The pollution is other crucial issues. This pollution is originated from lots of means of transport, companies or mostly the awareness of residents. This can cause a wide range of health problems such as cancer.Because of these problems, the governments should encourange people move to small regional towns to balance living. Governments should run a meaningful campaign of this issue and give money to people who can not afford to pay the bill to live in the bid cities. If population is balanced, the problems will decrease such as air quality which impact directly to the health or people who move can develop the economic area where they move in. And then the country will develop more substainably.＋

＋In conclusion, I argue that people should move in small towns instead of continuously living in the bid cities to pursue the peace and no-stress life.