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Some people think that international tourism has positive effects on a country. Others, however, believe that it can cause negative impacts. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that international tourism has positive effects on a country. Others, however, believe that it can cause negative impacts. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Introduction

With the development of tourism, more and more people want to travel to orther countries. So, some people believe that international torism has positive effects on a country, others people think that it can cause negative impact. This essay will focus on both views and giving my opinion.

Body

First of all, tourism from orther country to my country are main cause of mixing culture. Each country has different about between lifestyle, custom and tradition. So, a person to orther country who can't lifestyle same, and form that will easy create confict with local communities.For example, a French tourist who travel to Vietnamese but they don't understand dinning customs such as when eat Vietnamese used chopstick, they will meet difficult and full enjoy all the dishes there. Then, tourist will learnt about use chopstick after a long time, and sometime they also talk to other people some culture in their countries. However, some people don't like with this statement and they talk that it bring negative impacts. They like nature culture, old custome and tradition form history and they want to keep it intact.

On the orther hand, internatational tourism bring many benefits with both goverment and local communities. With goverment, domestic tourism strong development, this help increase enconomy a fast way. From that goverment will has much money to improve infrastructure, update public transport, and many other things, especially the country will strong develpoment. With local communities, their children will have many opportunity to access and learnt with different foreign languages. Instead of they just learnt fewer lesson at school, they can practice some skills like speaking, listening in real life, and this help they improve their knowledge.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although some people dislike mixing culture of foreign tourist, international tourism bring many more positive effect for my country. It not only help increase economic but also open many free foreign languages class in real life. Event if it make mixing culture also help local communities learnt more about new cultures in the world

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