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Topic 2: The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Topic 2: The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction

wadays, the media's tendency to focus on negative news such as violent crimes and crises over positive developments. I agree with this view, although bad news plays an important role in emerged citizens about dangers, overly negative news could bring certain consequences for both individuals and the government.

Body

Firstly, the continuous reception of bad news could be harmful for people’s psychological health and interpersonal connection . Basically, humans tend to pay more attention to problems and emergencies. When the press continuous show negative information about natural disaster, crimes and wars, most of people likely to view their world as an danger places and felt doubt to even innocent people around them, despite it not true.For example, people who spent hours to read about emergencies and problems on social media can easily feel anxious or fear even they are all safe. Because of that, too much negative news can create an unnecessary psychology burden.Moreover, this trend can also distorted public preparation and reduce trust in the community. When mass media prior negative problems, achievements in health, education and medical are less common. This phenomenon trigger to lot of people judge the society in pessimistic direction and believe that problems always outweighs positive developments. This unbalance information can cause awareness skew and make residents lose trust in their community. Ultimately, this can trigger to reduction of motivation in contribute positive activities for the society.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although negative news can enhance people’s caution and public’s awareness i completely agree that excessive focus on problems and emergencies severely damages individuals and the community as a whole.

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