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＋Some individuals believe that luck is the decisive factor of success in our life. Personally, I partly agree with this perspective and will outline my reasons in this essay.

Initially, there is a strong case for people who are born in wealthy families to have a higher opportunity to be successful. They are likely to be provided with better conditions in education and career throughout their life. For instance, they are able to study in international schools with high-qualified instructors and diverse types of curricular activities in order to develop comprehensively. They can also gain a lot of benefit from their parents’ connections and relationships. Their family backgrounds will become an essential factor determining their career and success in the future. In addition, people can also be successful when their lucky timing comes. A startup company, for example, might launch a new product right when a new trend starts and attract lots of targeted audience from it. As a result, this is largely a result of lucky timing and starting point.＋

However, I am convinced that success in life is mostly determined by consistency and personal qualities. To begin with, most people reach their goal after putting in years of dedication and effort of training and working hard. For instance, a successful doctor is required to spend years studying hard and practicing regularly in medical school to get the degrees and then have to work patiently as an intern in order to become a proper doctor. Furthermore, success is also the result of how people overcome challenges and failures. Many people receive lucky opportunities but then still fail after giving up impatiently when they encounter problems or difficulty. Therefore, determination and patience are what lead people into the right path and help them reach their goals.

＋In conclusion, although luck is an essential factor giving you opportunities to succeed, I believe that it is not the most decisive one. Without consistency and dedication, even the luckiest person would still struggle to maintain long-term success in their life.