+I feel closest to my cousin. Her name is Linh. She is my aunt's daughter. She was only 1year old when i was born, so she has been more like my sister. She is seventeen years old, we alway have a good relationship.
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Write an article about the relative you are closest to.
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She is studying at Phan Boi Chau high scchool with me. She is an exellent student and she has joined a lot of club in ours school. She reccives many awards, for example: won physics competition that was celebrated at Da Lat city. She is really good at English and play badminton and usually plays badminton with he friends so she has a good badminton skill. Linh has a lot of friends because she is very friendly and easy-going. She usually helps her friends when they need her or she is a leader in the team maybe she is an entrovered person.+
I think she quite tall and good - looking. she is one metre seventy tall with light skin. I play with her when i was 2 years old and she 3years old, We talk about anythings in our lives and she is a first person i can share my emotion with.. I can talks to her about my problems which i can not talk with my parent. so she can give me a lot of good advice. Therefore we are paticularly understand about ourshelf.+
She learns and plays sports very well so she has a healthy body and good balance. She usually makes me asleep early and hang out with me when i feel bored. We used to hang out at cafe or walk around our town. That is a great time. Sometime, she teaches me English and i also teach he play instruments.
Conclusion
+She is extremeky wants to be a business woman, because she wants to be a rich or famous, so i hope she can
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