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＋The majority of people believe that parents are responsible for their children’ behaviors to be good residents of society, while others argue that school still plays a pivotal role in shaping children personality. From my perspective, even though children can learn what actions are suitable in school, I firmly agree that parents are given priority to reflect children’s characteristics during their growing up period and become a critism source when their offsprings act impolitely.

Admittedly, school has responsibilities to fit children’s behaviors in a good shape. To begin with, undeniably, nowadays children spend most of their time every single day studying at school and interacting with friends along with teachers. They get up very early in order to go to school in the morning and stay at school until the late afternoon, which means they having long hours at school and they therefore being accustomed to the environment that they exposed to everyday. For instance, my little cousin, who is now five years old, is fluent in English and extremely potential at languages. This is because she has a chance to study English when she was three and meet numerous foreign friends very frequently. Another contributing reason why school is a reliable place for children is that teachers are trained very carefully before directing students. In my country, Vietnam, teaching field is the first and foremost specialization that receiving countless benefits; therefore, a large number of people have a sense of encouragement to continue teaching their students how to be a good citizen. Besides, many schools invest in modern technology, human resource, and green space for students, hence, they have an approach to developed environment and have opportunities to raise an awareness according to positive ways.＋

On the other hand, parents are the main reason of children’ behaviors. Firstly, parents are the mirros reflecting children’s personality. From the beginning of each life, parents also appear as the people who shape lifestyles of their offsprings. One research has said that children immediately imitate what adults do, so it makes sense when children have the same personality as their parents. Moreover, parents are mainly responsible for their children’ bad behaviors. When society critise a child, they naturally direct to their parents and blame their flawed parenting. As a result, that family has a bad reputation and affects adversely to another unrelated members.＋

＋In conclusion, while school remains a good position of shaping children personality, I strongly believe that parents play a crucial role in reflecting their offspring’s behaviors since they are the mirrors reflecting their children and the critism source of society when their children behave unsuitably.