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The graph below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Dưới đây là toàn bộ bài viết của bạn được nối liền mạch và loại bỏ các phần ghi chú mực đỏ: The board illustrates the ratio of adults in countryside and city areas who looked after four leisure activities from 1990 to 2010. Overview, this board gave information about how many people in urban and rural areas attended to 4 things to do in free time. Both year 1990 and 2000, reading is the best activity, which have the high proportion and always above 60%. First, in 1990, countryside adults and city people did not keen on photography, just perspectively 7% and 14%. Instead of this, reading attracted a lot of people in both side of areas, about 61% for urban and 71% for rural. Also, reading won the first prize at this board with the percentage of adults most high. Second, in year 2000, urban and rural areas human went on interested in Reading activity, both had 78% and higher than 10 years ago. Not at all, adults from remote areas and city centre did not crazy about animated play, only 10% and 14% perspectively. With year 1990, this activity went down 4% from rural area and the same with urban adults.

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