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The plans below show a small theatre in 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

19/07/2026 18:38 5.5 skor

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The plans below show a small theatre in 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

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The pictures illustrate the changes made to the layout of a small auditorium between the years 2010 and 2012. In general, it was apparent that a theatre underwent significant changes, the most prominent of which are the addition of some new service rooms and the expansion of spaces . Looking at the pictures in detail, one interesting change was that the admin and ticket offices were located in the bottom left-hand corner of the picture, but after 2 years, they were relocated to make way for a new restaurant. An admin office was moved next to the auditorium and a coffee shop was demolished and replaced by the ticket office. However, if we look at the seating area, it remained the same from 2010 to 2012. Shifting focus to the top of the auditorium space, the performance area witnessed a significant development, doubling in size over a period of two years. Another striking modification was that the dressing room moved to the top left-hand corner and the storage was repositioned to the top right-hand corner of the picture. Moreover, a new corridor was constructed behind the performance area to replace the dressing room. A final notable development involved the addition of new facilities such as shower rooms next to the stage.

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