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＋＋There is a debate whether parents of children breaking the laws should be punished in some ways as parents should take the responsibility for the children's behaviors. From my perspective, I partly disagree with this statement. Although children are affected by parent's teaching, not always they cannot ensure that their children would listen to them.＋

Admittedly, parents should be held partly accountable to a certain situations because they are children's primary role models and educators. During their children's lives, they teach them from things that fundamentally essential such as moral values, self-disciplined and sense of responsibility, which shaped their identity and behaviors and influence their decisions they make later in life. But in reality, there are also a proportion of parents do not act like a parental supervisions, as they neglect and leaving their children without adequate supervision. This phenomenon leading to the corruption in mental well-being of children, and the misbehavior rising among them. For example, students without their parent's teaching of respect school rules are more likely to engaging in bullying or vandalizing school rather than those receiving consistent parental supervisions. Consequently, it is unfair to assume that every parents should be punished, it really depends on the way of parents teaching their children.

Another compelling reason why parents should not be punished by their children's action is that as they are not only influence by their parents but also external influences especially their friends and their social networking. Children, particularly teenagers, spend considerable time with their friends, chatting and notify their social acceptance, which influence significantly to their thinking and behaviors. For example, some teenagers participate in team of bullying, despite being raised responsibility, would also have a tendency to bully others people. Therefore, these problems stem from others factor, not always their parents.

＋In conclusion, I firmly believe that parents have a significant influence on children's minds and action. However, parents should only be held accountable when they neglect their children, otherwise, childrens must ultimately be responsible for their own misconduct.