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＋Many people believe that balance diet and the nutrients in foods must be taught in school education; others think that parents should teach their children about healthy food and diet. In my opinion, schools must teach about balance diet and food nutrients as a mandatory subject.

On the one hand, some people believe that parents should be responsible for teaching their children about healthy eating because they have the greatest influence on their children's early development. During the first few years of life, children spend most of their time with their families, making parents their first teachers. As a result, parents can educate them about the importance of a balanced diet and the nutritional value of different foods through everyday meals. In addition, in some developing countries where many children do not have access to formal education, parents become the primary source of knowledge. By passing on their own experiences and encouraging healthy eating habits from an early age, they can help their children build a strong foundation for a healthy lifestyle.

On the other hand, I believe that schools should take primary responsibility for educating children about healthy eating and nutrition. The main reason is that schools can provide accurate and scientifically based knowledge through qualified teachers, ensuring that all students receive the same high-quality education regardless of their family background. Furthermore, nutrition education can be incorporated into the school curriculum through subjects such as biology or health education, as well as practical activities like cooking classes and healthy eating campaigns. Consequently, children can not only understand the importance of a balanced diet and essential nutrients but also develop lifelong healthy eating habits that reduce the risk of obesity and other diet-related diseases.

＋In short, I believe that schools have a primary responsibility for educating children about a balanced diet; however, parents are also factors that help children shape their values and outlook on life.