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＋Some argue that because of the advancements in technology, crime rates might decline. Therefore, these improvements will help people prevent and solve crimes in an easier way.＋ Although such technological improvements can take a crucial role in preventing crimes from comiting in traditionally criminal activities, I still strongly disagree with this sentiment because such improvements can enable crimes with a new form of crimes.

Advocates of this view may point to the reason that such technological updates can prevent offenders from committing in public places. They may think that thanks to some under-surveillance cameras, this can help many people prevent crimes from taking some activities, such as robberies in some places like parks, shopping malls, and residential homes. This can then eventually provide society with a sense of safety, especially for victims. For instance, with many up-to-date cameras in some public places in the USA, the number of crimes taking part in public areas has declined sharply in recent decades.＋

Nevertheless, improvements in technology can lead to cybercrimes. This can be explained by the fact that with high-tech and high-security features of many online platforms, crimes can easily hide their personal information and committee their criminal purposes. In recent years, these technological developments often result in a higher number of offenders who steal bank account and illegary transfer funds in Vietnam. As a result, this example highlights the drawbacks of the fast development of technologies nowadays.

＋In conclusion, while the fast development of technology can tackle criminal problems in traditional sides, this can lead to the development of cybercrimes. Hence, I firmly disagree with this viewpoint.