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The graph below shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004.

20/07/2026 07:10 6.0 points

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The graph below shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004.

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The provided line graph compares and contrasts data on the participations of people in world-famous football matches across three European countries - the Italy, England and Germany over the 24-year period. Overall, it is readily apparent that the attendance of matches in the Italy started at the largest number of people, followed by an upward trend to its highest point in 1986; however, it then plummeted to the lowest point in the final year, ranked at the third. While the figure for he England and Germany experienced a gradual decline to their bottom in 1986, they shifted to climb steadily to hit their peak in 2004, with the Germany at the first and the England at the second. A deel analysis of the chart reveals that 35 thousands of people was represented by the Italy at the outset of 1980, it continuously grew to reach about 37 thounsands in 1986, ranked at the first. Nevertheless, this category witnessed an immense decrease in the remaining period, ranked at the final position with 34 thousand recorded. Shifiting the focus to the rest of groups, the latter of the England and Germany began at a mere 27 and 25 thousand, respectively, then fell to their lowest points in 1986. It can be seent that they both rose in the remaing period, with the exceeding of the Germany in 1993 to its highest point of just under 35 thousands of people, followed the England group at the second of 33 thousand.

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