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＋＋Imagination about a building that is crucial in terms of culture and history but too old in my city, i think it is necessary to keep trying to preserve and renovate it because of the benefit of tourism and usefulness to the education.

An aging building may need preserving. An ancient building is usually associated with history and culture, so this building should be protected from disappearance. If doing this, they can keep track of many customs and stories about the history without only dependence on books. Moreover, preserving it means avoiding lack of erosion about your tradition, especially the young generation. For examples, more and more individuals nowadays in Vietnam have a tendency to join organizations that have a strategy about preservation many ancient sites including many oldest facilities.＋There are many benefits from protecting this building. One of the most remarkable merits is that promoting the tourism. Many countries such as China, Egypt, Japan have attracted much travelers and tourists coming because of their culture and history clearly blowing up the ancient buildings such as The Pyramid and The Great Wall of China. People are intend to travel to continents which is plentiful about the enormous historical buildings just in order to identify these. Other reasons is that these ancient building helps the following generations have a deeper insight into their custom and history without only dependency on books. Because of this way, young people are likely to be more excited about what happened in the past and it is easier for them to directly understanding rather traditional teaching methods.＋

＋In conclusio, we should preserve these ancient building due to promotion to the tourism and the understanding and excitement of the following generations