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＋＋It is true that some museums require visitors to pay for entrance fee. Although this can bring about some positive effects, the drawbacks involved are far more significant.

There can be some minor disadvantages to charging people to view museum exhibits. Perhaps one of these is that it may discourage people from visiting museums. As a result, citizens may have fewer chances to learn about their country's history and culture, which can gradually weaken their sense of cultural identity. Moreover, museums that have received considerable investment may become underused and lose their value if they can not attract visitors. The Ha Noi Museum, by way of illustration, costed more than 100 million USD to construct, but it was criticized soon after opening for attracting relatively few visitors. This is why I believe that this doing can cause many detrimental effects.

Nevertheless, the fact that museums charge for access can be beneficial for several reasons. Chief among these is that it provides funding for museums to operate and develop, thereby improving visitors' overall experience. This is important because many individuals who visit the museums regularly believe that continuous investment helps museums become more attractive to visitors, and allows them to fully enjoy the tour. For instance, people no longer have to complain about poor air-conditioning systems that makes the galleries uncomfortably hot or the shortage of staff, leading to numerous difficulties for visitors to have a profound understand of historical and cultural significance of the exhibits. For these reasons, I contend that charging for entry can bring several benefits to both the museums and customers.

＋In conclusion, charging for admission to the museums can be beneficial in various ways. However, this phenomenon can produce some negative effects which are of greater significance.