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The charts below illustrate the percentage of time that male and female students spend on five different types of websites. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below illustrate the percentage of time that male and female students spend on five different types of websites. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Two pie graphs demonstrate the rate of time that male and female learners allocate to five various categories of online platforms. Overall, it can be seen that sport online platforms account for the highest percentage of male students' time while female students spend most of their time on those of study. Time spend on other applications is similar between female and male students, which occupy a small proportion. On the one hand, sport websites constitute 35% of the total time dedicated to various applications by male scholars, closely followed by study websites with 30%. Moreover, news applications take up 20% of male scholars' time, significantly higher than the figure for shopping websites, which account for 5%. On the other hand, female scholars' time devoted to study applications is the highest, which occupies 45% of the total. In contrast, woman students allocate only 10% of their total time to sport websites. In comparison with shopping applications, which make up 20% of the total, those of news are lower by 5 percentage points.

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