नमूना विवरण

＋There are variety of different views on whether the growth of child is significant impacted from family, or whether the external factors effect the child’s development. In my opinion, the development of children mainly depends on the outsource.

On the one hand, there are some major rationales that explain why people think that child’s development is strongly effected by the external factors. Nowadays, there are more children are likely to go outside to find and try new things, even they want to improve their skills, and practical experience due to their curiosity. However, they are too young to know which is wrong or right; they access to the wrong information from the internet or meet bad people. Thus, more children are want to imitate some bad actions from the other people or internet.＋ As the result, this can make the children face with the problems in mental and physical health in the future.

On the other hand, opponents from the previous view claim that children are mainly impacted from their parents. Children are a big mirror that reflexes the parents’ personalities. In the previous years, some knowledge and information which were difficult to access, so they can not access to the newest educations, and modern technologies. Thus, they might teach their children to do bad things by chance. Moreover, in some cases, there are some families which are not good, so children can be strongly effected from the family’s violence. As the result, the children can deal with the problems about mental health in the future, and it can cause children more likely to imitate the actions which are not good as their parent do.＋

＋In conclusion, although people believe that family are the main reason that effect the growth of child, I personally believe that external factors have a big influence on the development of child.