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The chart below shows the number and the purpose of trips made by men and women in a certain European country in 2007. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the number and the purpose of trips made by men and women in a certain European country in 2007. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates how many people travelled for several reasons in a specific European country in 2007. Overall, the number of men travelling for all purposes was higher than that of women, except for ‘visiting friends’ and ‘shopping’ purposes. Moreover, the figures for travelling to work were the highest among surveyed reasons, and the opposite was true for day trip purposes. Looking at men’figures, the number of males making trips for work stood at around 340 thousand, which was the highest figure in the chart. Meanwhile, the figures for ‘shopping’ and ‘visiting friends’ reasons were nearly the same, around 180 thousand men making trips for these purposes. This was followed by sports and entertainment purposes, with the number of men making journeys being approximately 140 thousand. Meanwhile, only 30 thousand males made day trip in a specific European country. Returning to the remaining category, around 270 thousand women travelled for shopping compared to approximately 200 thousand females for ‘work’ and ‘visiting friends’ reasons, marking a gap of around 70 thousand individuals. Meanwhile, the number of female people making trips for sports and entertainment reasons was around 130 thousand. And only 20 thousand women made day trip, which was the lowest figure among surveyed categories.

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