Nowadays, Choosing to work remotely or study form home has been increased rapidly in many nations, due to the affordability and accessibility of morden internet. Although this trend has some negative effects on the society, I believes its benefit is more significant.
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In many countries, an increasing number of people are choosing to work from home or study from home as computers and the internet become more affordable and accessible. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
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In many countries, an increasing number of people are choosing to work from home or study from home as computers and the internet become more affordable and accessible. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
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On the one hand, working or studying at home has some negative impacts. For the highest performance of studying or working, the students and workers need to be completely concentrated on the tasks. However, the pop-up notifications would prevent them form being completely concentrated, they might be distracted, leading to low-quality result. Especially for students who find it hard to control themselves in the face of many addictive online activities.+ On the other hand, this trend is a huge opportunity for people who live in rural areas. Internet helps many students access to the global knowledge. They would be able to attend the online courses which are almost impossible to do there. Moreover, working remotely can helps local people working for foreign companies, resulting in there quality of life would be completely enhanced.+
Conclusion
+In conclusion, while there are many drawbacks regarding the efficiency of the final result, I still believe that it is more beneficial for someone who is living out in the sticks. It is advisable that schools or companies implement many strict punishments for those who lack of integrity.
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