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In recent years, some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Introduction

It is often considered a negative development that some individuals decide to be a start-up rather than working in company, industrial zone or organization. This essay will discuss the main drawbacks of this trend.

Body

On the one hand, people can’t refuse the benefit which entrepreneurship bring for businesspeople. Personal development is the most common advantage. Trying more and more occupation, entrepreneurs may get their experience throught many fields or environments. Especially business people can learn many skills which can help them to managing their organization like leadership skills or financial management skills. For example, Bill Gates who is the Microsoft CEO and the millonares. Before being a millonares he decided to refuse Harvard university to started his own business. During the first period, he have learn many experience throught make mistakes or failes. Therefore he developed his skills, improve in his software and help his company pass to challenging. On the other hand, entrepreneurship has many disadvantages for people, especially for graduates. The first benefit is the prohibitive stress levels, while people be their own business there have many challenging which entrepreneurs have to solve it. Therefore business leader often face difficult to managing high workload and financial in their company therefore it can cause many stress and intangible pressure for business people like financial pressure or unemployess risk. Secondly is unstable occupation, entrepreneur have to adapt on life with job instability, they don’t have boss to pay salaries each month. Because their financial depent on invesment from another organization or stakeholders.

Conclusion

In conclusion, entrepreneurship can lead to many venture that people must consider to follow it. However the disadvantages still notablly higher than benefits.

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