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The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons why they took part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the types of communication training taken by employees in an international company and the reasons why they took part in this training. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart describes the various kinds of communication training taken by staff in an international company, along with the reasons why they participated in such courses. Overall, the figure for part-time training in the evening dominated the category of communication training, while that for distant learning was the lowest. Moreover, holiday travel accounted for the highest reason, while communication with clients was the lowest for taking part in the courses. Regarding the sort of communication training, part-time training accounted for the largest share at 39%, while distant learning was the lowest at 5%. Moreover, self-tuition and part-time weekend training stood at the same level at 22% during this period. Furthermore, intensive training was the third-highest at 12% of the total. Concerning the underlying motivations, holiday travel was the dominant reason at 46%, while business travel was the second-highest at 17%, which was 3% higher than personal interest at 14%, followed by other reasons at 13%. In addition, communication with clients was the fifth-highest at 10%.

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