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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

20/07/2026 12:06 5.5 skor

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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Introduction

Now, when the society in the some countries is developing far away and everything is more comfortable, choosing the education way become easier for young people. In this context, there are some argue that young people should spend 1 year after graduating high school for traveling or working, someone think contrast. This essay will discuss both view and present my own opinion.

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On the one hand, when people take 1 year before involving university to travel or work, it is easier and earlier for them to have more experience than people who study like normal. Because the students must focus almost all their time on learning the knowledge so they usually just have the experience about academic area instead of living. Traveling and working early can help them develop some life skills which are not taught at the school. For example, the young people work early can know the best way for earning money earlier and they also have more working experiences. Thanks to that, they can become more independent after graduating than the normal students.

On the other hand, if student spend time to do work too early, they usually do not want to come back the school and it can effect on their long-term benefits in the future. Like as when they take time to travel, they can will the world is very interesting to exploration instead of studying some boring theory on the school. Besides if they do work before take part in university, they can feel make money is more crucial than study so they never come back without awaring it is just a short-term advantages.Therefore, it cause their future is less develop than normal students.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I think there are both advantages and disadvantage about this problem, the most important thing to decide is the students’ aim and the financial of their family because it also involve a nermous part.

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