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The bar chart gives information about overweight Australian men and women

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The bar chart gives information about overweight Australian men and women

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The bar chart reveal the percentage of overweight Australian men and woman over a 30 year period. Overall, the proportion of overweight Australian men grew over time, reaching its peak at 2000 with 65%. It reduces minimally in 2010 which in contrast to the Australian women maintained its value from the previous 10 year interval. The female rate of overweight experienced an upward trend just like that of the Australian men but it values was slightly lower than that of the men. Firstly, the men proportion over the years were 40%, 50%,65%, and 60% in 1980,1990,2000 and 2010 respectively while that of the women were 30%,45%,50% and 50% in the same succession of years as the Australian men. Notably, in 1990, The proportion of both the Australian men and woman almost hit the same value. Moreover, there was an equilibrium in the values of Australian woman being overweight in 2000 and 2010,.

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TA6.0
CC6.0
LR6.0
GRA5.0

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