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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages

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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages

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Introduction

The debate on the closure of small town-centre shops replaced by the increasingly omnipresence of large out-of-town stores often questions whether the increase of simultaneous demands for private cars would be beneficial or disadvantageous. From my perspective, despite acknowledging its shortcomings in terms of a rising level of carbon emissions, I contend that its social advantages via housing issues and accommodation would more than outweigh any associated downsides.

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Admittedly, the requirements for moving away to the suburban centers would result in the increase of private cars, which by far pose several risks to the ecological system. One of the most compelling reasons is that when consumers are inclined to go shopping for necessary groceries or dietary ingredients, these required products need adapting in a short-term period in order to adapt to contemporary needs, especially in this materialistic society. Private cars, therefore, become the most efficient and time-saving approach for average residents. Parallel to this, more fossil-fuel vehicles participate in the transportation system, emitting a large amount of carbon emissions, which would be a catalyst for environmental problems such as global warming or climate change. Another frequently cited downside lies in the financial burden on a variety of disadvantaged familiy, the impoverished and undergarduates. Such a fast-paced demand for cars would seriously place pressure on those originating from a fragile monetary backgrounds and also degrade the living habitat while resulting in the run-out of natural resources.

On the other hand, despite the aforementioned drawbacks, I contend that the ecological problems could be straightforwardly addressed through sustainable policies. This is because conventional cars have been updated with hygiene-machine systems or modern techniques, in order to reduce the emission of carbon footprints. In other words, the implementation of less carbon-intensive public transport emerges as a sustainable solution to cut down on the overconsumption of fossil-fuel means, restoring non-renewable energy for the following generations while promoting the conservation of the ecological system. More importantly, the replacement of small town-centre shops by large out-of-town ones could create more space for residential housing areas, which would spontaneously alleviate the alarming shortage of accommodation among local residents. Meanwhile, this development also encourages citizens to expand their residential areas to the suburban regions, as the extension of larger shops would create more employment opportunities, contributing to the general economic growth. These mentioned advantages realistically outperform the minor concerns about environmental issues.

Conclusion

In conclusion, while acknowledging that additional cars could pose a serious danger to the natural habitat, I am firmly on the side with the view that its impacts could be eliminated and tackled through sustainable policies, with the upsides outweighing the disadvantages.

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