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Some people think that technology makes people more isolated, while others believe it helps people communicate better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

20/07/2026 13:01 6.5 skor

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Some people think that technology makes people more isolated, while others believe it helps people communicate better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Introduction

In today’s world of telecommunication advancement, many individuals feel like being isolated while others said technology helps their communications much easier. This essay, prior to giving own perspective, is going to explore both views.

Body

Over time, as technology grows, people just need smart devices like phones or laptops and social media to make friends. Making friends nowadays just takes a few seconds, it is seen as convenience but is it? For a long time chatting online with “friends” will put our brain into a trap. It may seem digital friends are just like that, and slowly lack the ability to make a real conversation. At that time, individuals, even if they notice or not, will completely isolate themselves from the outside world. On the other hand, in some cases, thanks to digital-based solutions, communications are much better than ever before. In the past, when telecommunication did not appear, having a conversation with friends who are in another nation was impossible. However, recently, telecommunication and translation features have made a deep contribution to global connection. Moreover, it also helps individuals who are disadvantaged to work from their accommodations. Giving them an opportunity to work and study like mentioned boosts their confidence and bravery to communicate.

Conclusion

In conclusion, personally, technology is a breakthrough for people's connection. However, relying on digital devices too much can act like a “boomerang” to us. To maximize the benefits from this advancement, people need to balance their own real and visual life. Moreover, governments’ policies and digital-based solutions can make a difference.

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