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＋＋Entertainment such as video games on mobile devices is detrimental to individuals and their society. Although I acknowledge that this type of entertainment has some drawbacks, I partly disagree with the view claiming that it is completely harmful.

Admittedly, spending too much time for playing video games can bring some detrimental effects. First, many video games now contains violent content such as shooting or fighting. Over time, players can consider that violence is normal and develop more aggressive behaviors, especially children who cannot distinguish between the virtual world and reality. Another disadvantage is that adolescents can be addicted to playing video games. When this happens, they often neglect their studies and dedicate all their time to playing games. As a result, they tend to have poor academic performance and ruin their future.＋

However, I believe that playing electronic games on mobile devices can bring many practical benefits. The chief benefit is that playing games can be an effective way to relieve stress. With portable devices, many people can easily unwind at various times and places after a difficult working day. Consequently, they can improve their mental health and avoid stress. Besides, some multiplayer games can create social connection between people around the world when they play those games. In addition, players can enhance their teamwork skills via cooperating and communicating with their teammates. Players can also broaden their perspectives and make more foreign friends when they play with people from different countries.＋

In conclusion, although playing video games on mobile devices can be addictive and affect players' health, I strongly believe that the advantages of playing games outweigh its disadvantages because it helps people relive stress and develop practical skills.