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The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparisons where relevant

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The given line graph compares the birth and death figures in a European country over a 100-years period, starting from 1950 and including some predictions up to 2050. Overall, while the number of births undergoes a significant fluctuating trend throughout the period, the death rate remains more stable. Moreover, although births surpassed deaths for the first 40 years, the latter are projected to exceed the birth rate for the remainder of the century At the beginning of the period, the birth figure was roughly 750,000 people, which was slightly higher than the 680,000 deaths. From this starting point, the number of babies born experienced a fluctuating trend when reaching its peak with 1,000,000 people before plummeting to its lowest point of below 600,000 within just 40 years. In stark contrast, the mortality rate remained relatively stable with about 700,000 deaths in 1970 then returning to the starting point in 1990. This year witnessed a crossover, with the number of deaths surpassing that of births for the first time in the period. Regarding 60 remaining years of the century, both figures express sharp changes. The number of births increased to 750,000 people in 2010, momentarily converting with the death figure. This pattern is predicted to remain unchanged in 2030 before the mortality figure escalates to 800,000 in 2050 while the birth rate is likely to level off at 700,000 people.

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