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Write a paragraph (of approximately 150 words) to answer the following question: In some countries, teenagers are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this?

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Write a paragraph (of approximately 150 words) to answer the following question: In some countries, teenagers are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this?

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Introduction

From my perspective, this phenomenon is mainly caused by several justifications.

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One of the main reasons is to meet high expectations from parents, which can be seen clearly that in some competitive households, parents often put a burden on their children, regarding achievements. They believe that getting good marks may help their children have more opportunities in studies, so they always want their children to excel academically in class. As a result, teenagers often experience psychological distress, eventually leading to the loss of motivation and depression in the long term. Another notable cause is peer pressure; in fact, because a growing number of teenagers often register online courses during summer breaks to get ahead, others feel compelled to do the same to avoid falling behind their peers. Consequently, such teenagers often struggle with deadlines from extra classes, so they easily feel bored and exhausted, leading to burnout and the deterioration of physical and mental well-being.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although hard work is crucial, when everyone puts high expectations, children will easily become overwhelmed.

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