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The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009

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The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism-related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009

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The chart illustrates the number of jobs in tourism-related industries of restaurants was thể highest in the majority of the given time. On the other hand, the figure for travel/tours was the lowest in the majority of the given time. In 1989, the number of job in tourism-related industries of restaurants was about 1100 billion. This was followed by the figures for hotels, sport/leisure and travel/tours, at about 1050, 840 and 800 billion, respectively. By 2009, the numbers of jobs in tourism-related industries of hotels and travel/tours rise to hits peak of about 1400 and 1050 billion, respectively in 1994. But then they decline to 1050 and 400 billion, respectively in 2009. However, the figure for restaurants experienced significant increase to hit a peak of 1600 billion in2004, before decreasing to 1300 billion in 2009. Finally, the number of job in tourism-related industries of sport/leisure reduced to hit the bottom of 700 billion in 1994, but then it went up to around 1050 billion in 1999, before going down to 700 billion in 2009

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