The provided bar chart illustrates the alternative paths chosen by UK bachelor’s and higher degree holders, excluding those who secured full-time jobs, following their graduation in the year 2008. Overall, it is highly noticeable that the number of students pursing further academic education was the most popular option in both groups. Moreover, the figure for graduates who opted for each destination was exponentially higher than the corresponding number of post-graduates. Regarding the graduates graduate group , the number of students selecting further study stood at just under 30 thousand, followed by that for part-time jobs at approximately 18 thousand. Furthemore, while roughly over 16 thousand graduates were unemployed, only 3.5 thousand students chose to do voluntary work. Looking at the details , the number of UK postgradutes pursing higher diplomas was approximately 2.7 thousand, equivalent to under a tenth of the figure for graduates. Moreover, the figure for transient work was around 2.5 thousand in comparison with about 1.6 thousand of unemployment. Finally, there were a few postgraduate students opting for voluntary work, which was only 345 students.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the alternative paths chosen by UK bachelor’s and higher degree holders, excluding those who secured full-time jobs, following their graduation in the year 2008. Overall, it is highly noticeable that the number of students pursing further academic education took the first place in both groups. Moreover, the figure for graduates who opted for each destination was exponentially higher than the corresponding number of post-graduates. Regarding the figure for graduates, the number of students opting for further study stood at just about under 30 thousand, followed by that for part-time job at approximately 18 thousand. Furthemore, while roughly just over 16 thousand graduates were unemployed, only 3.5 thousand students chose to do voluntary work. In finer details, the number of UK postgradutes pursing higher diplomas was approximately 2.7 thousand, equivalent to under a tenth of the figure for graduates. Moreover, the figure for transient work was around 2.5 thousand in comparison of about 1.6 thousand of unemployment. Ultimately, there were a few postgraduate students opting for voluntary work, which was only 345 students.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the alternative paths chosen by UK bachelor’s and higher degree holders, excluding those who secured full-time jobs, following their graduation in the year 2008. Overall, it is highly noticeable that the number of students pursing further academic education took the first place in both groups. Moreover, the figure for graduates who opted for each destination was exponentially higher than the corresponding number of post-graduates. Regarding the figure for graduates, the number of students opting for further study stood at just about under 30 thousand, followed by that for part-time job at approximately 18 thousand. Furthemore, while roughly just over 16 thousand graduates were unemployed, only 3.5 thousand students chose to do voluntary work. In finer details, the number of UK postgradutes pursing higher diplomas was approximately 2.7 thousand, equivalent to under a tenth of the figure for graduates. Moreover, the figure for transient work was around 2.5 thousand in comparison of about 1.6 thousand of unemployment. Ultimately, there were a few postgraduate students opting for voluntary work, which was only 345 students.
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