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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

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The given table delineates the total population and the percentage of six distinct sections of Australian and Malaysia from 1980 an 2002. Overall, the most noticeable is that the total population of Malaysia first was the dominat, but in the end of period, it took the lead compared to Australia. Meanwhile, the percentage of people aged over 65 of Australia always higher the that of Malaysia. Regarding the former, in 1980, the total population was around 14.7 million people, its figure than climbed more than 5 millions, at 19.6 million people. Coming to the figures for male and female population in Australia, they first accounted for 49.9% and 50.1%, respectively, after 22 years, it still remained unchanged. Besides that, the proportion of birth rate made up for 1.5%, before experiencing a decrease of 0.2 percentage point, at 1.3% in 2002. The avergae annual population had a proportion of 1.2 in 1980 and in the end of the period, the figure then rose slightly to around 1.3%. Finally, the population of people who aged 65 and over, in 1980, its figure represented 9.6%. It then increased to 12.4% in the final year. In terms of the latter, the total population in 2002 was approximately 24.3 million people after appearing at 13.7 millions, which was much smaller than that of Australia, in the beginning of the period. The percentage of male and female in Malaysia followed the opposite trend. While the male population increased from 50.3% to 50.6%, the figure for the female was at 49.7% before observing a drop of 0,3 percentage point, at 49.4%. Similarly, the proportion of average annual population experienced a downward trend, which started made up 2.4% in 1980, while in 2002, it was just around 2.1%. As regard to the population aged over 65 in Malaysia, the proportion in 1980 accounted for 3.7%, and in the end of the period, its figure edged up to 4.3%

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