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The table below shows the unemployment rate in four countries from 2010 to 2020. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The table below shows the unemployment rate in four countries from 2010 to 2020. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The given table illustrates the rate of unemployment in four countries over the period from 2010 to 2020. Overall, in 2010, the proportions of unemployment in Canada and South africa were the highest, whereas the percentage of unemployment rate in japan was the lowest. While in the last year, the figure for unemployment rate in Brazil and South africa were ranked top highest, although the rate of unemployment in japan was accounted for smaller proportion. To begin with, from 2010 to 2014, the percentage of unployment rate in south africa was the highest among 4 countries, which stood at 24.7%, 25.1% and 26.3% respectively. Whereas the figure for unemployment rate in japan remained the lowest, which its data declined from 5.1% to 3.6% respectively. In addition, the rate of unployment in brazil and Canada shared a similar trend, with its figure saw an downward trend, which decreased from 7.0% to slightly 6.8% and 8.2% to approximately 7.2%. Over the period from 2016 to 2020, the proportion for unemployment rate in south africa consistenly dominated in the bar chart, which its figure sharply rose from 26.7% to 28.2% respectively . While unemployment rate in canada experienced a marginal drop to 6.5% compared with that of brazil surged to 13.5%, making it the second highest rate. Ultimately, unemployment rate in japan consumed a smaller proprtions for 3 years, which stood at 2.9%, making it the lowest rate.

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