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Some people believe technology has improved people's quality of life, while others think it has caused more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe technology has improved people's quality of life, while others think it has caused more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Introduction

Some people think technology brings a significant improvement to the living standard of people, whereas others believe it has triggered more issues than advantages. This essay will discuss both views of this issue, and I contend that technology has more benefits to our lives.

Body

On the one hand, technology can cause some drawbacks because it is created by some code which has some errors occasionally. When using technology such as websites, we can lost our private information because some websites are not strong enough to protect it. Nowadays, there are a wide range of technology which can mimic our faces and behaviors for fraudulent purposes. Because of the technological advancements, more and more people are cheated and they have lost a large amount of money. In addition ,the speed of accessing information is extremely rapid because individuals can live stream or post videos immediately. However, these information can be unconfirmed, so they can cause a misunderstanding in a large number of people.

On the other hand, technology brings a significant range of advantages for people’s quality of life. The improvement of technology allows individuals to change their communication way, humans use video calls or send messages through some special apps instead of face-to-face conversations. Furthermore, technology devices such as smart phones and computers can boost productivity of working, so people can spend more time improving themselves to become a better version. People use artificial intelligence to complete some simple tasks with high rate of accuracy, so they can have more time for their hobbies and studying. In addition ,the speed of accessing information is extremely rapid because individuals can live stream or post videos immediately.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the technological advancements can bring both advantages and disadvantages to out lives. However, I priority the knowledge of people to gain a wide a range of benefits while using technology.

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