+Nowadays, many children spend most of their time to use technology. This became significant increasing especially when children allowed to have their own smartphone+
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Many children today spend too much time using smartphone, tablets and computers. This has become a growing concern for parents and teachers. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
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Many children today spend too much time using smartphone, tablets and computers. This has become a growing concern for parents and teachers. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
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To begin with, technology have negative impact on children’s academic performance. This mainly because when children in class instead of attention to the lesson, they turn on the technology and check social media, text with friend and play games. This makes children don’t understand the lesson clearly and because of that students cheat in exams increasing in many years to come. For example, when children cheat, they have no skill or knowledge and this situation can affect their future very clearly.+ In addition, technology effects on their physical and mental health. This because the children spend most of their time to use technology alone and rather indoors activities more than outdoor activities make their eyes tired and without sunlight which bring them vitamin, they get weaker and weaker. They also always mad and shout at their parents make relationship between parents and children more pressure. For example, technology is the one of the reasons why children have developed mental delay.+ Furthermore, technology also effects on their social skill and limits face-to-face interaction. This mainly because children nowadays spend most of their time for technology and often communicate by using technology, this makes children less interact with everyone and have no social skill. For example, many children grow up without social skill and relationship, they hard to get work and hard to get closer with everyone.+ This situation mainly because of their parents, many parents just too busy and have no time for their children so they give their children technology, this helps the children stay quiet when their parents work but this causes a negative impact on the children.++
Conclusion
+To solve this problem, parents and teacher should limits time using technology and children use technology with teacher’s permission. Parents should spend more time to play with their children and support children to play sport or other outdoor activities. Children should use technology in school just for education and spend time to make friend with everyone Consequently, teachers and parents should teach the children how to use technology in positive ways and with society’s support we will together build a safer, heathier and productive learning environment.
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