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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph indicates how citizen in four Asian countries altered over a 50-year period from 1970 to 2020 and will be predicted for 2030 and 2040. Overall, we can see that the population of Malaysia increased dramatically and will be predicted the most common in the last year. It is very interesting to observe that the percentage of Indonesia followed the same pattern to the figure of Malaysia. According to the graph, it was seen that, the figure of Malaysia increased constantly from 30% to just over 70%, then from 2030 to 2040, this figure will rise continuously to around 80% and reach the highest point over the period. Then we can observe that the population of Indonesia went up gradually to around 48% between 1970 and 2020. After that, this figure is going to increase slightly to about 60% in 2040 In 1970, the figure of Philippines has the most common, then it increased sharply to about 50%, after that the population of Philippines decreased gradually to 40% in 2010, and from now on, the figure will increase significantly to about 50% in 2040 The last, we can see that there was an upward trend in the percentage of Thailand, and will reach the lowest point in 2040

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