+There is a debate about children watching TV, some people said that spend time watching television is harmful to kids, others argued that television can bring advantages to children. In my point of view, I agree that there are many beneficials that young people can get through television.
नमूना विवरण
Some people think watching TV is bad for children while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
विषय
Some people think watching TV is bad for children while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Introduction
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On the one hand, it can be denied that many children watch TV or approached to the internet too soon can build a bad habit of reliable, which can lead to many types of issues. To explain this, adults often let their kids access online devices when they just only two or three years older to comfort them, that can make them build a way of thinking that they can easily get what they want. Also, TV or systems that related to internet included a large number of topics and channels that parents cannot control their kids to research. Some children having a curious attitude may easily research or meet various harmful informations, some could also follow the activities they saw on screen without understanding deeply of the real meanings.+ In addition, watching TV without limited programs and knowledge can lead to worse results of children. On the other hand, watching television not only bring dangerous affects to kids, but also has it own useful education and entertainment. First, children who in the process of being grew up usually have a flexible brain that curious about many things in the world, such as life, space, animals. TV or internet websites involved all of these information and very helpful for kids to search and learn about it. For instance, some programs that shows the lifestyle of animals and informations about them often exists on TV or websites newspapers, which are always available for kids to find and read, making they improve the knowledge of animals. Furthermore, there several types of animations and cartoons that are extremely entertaining for children. Not only helping them feel more relax and unwind but also increase their imagination and logical way of thinking.
Conclusion
+In conclusion, spending time watch television may be a worse activity and bring harmful results to children, but it just happen when they do not know the right way to use and the lack of controlling from adults. I believe that kids can absorb a large amount of benefits if their know how to watch and entertain through TV in a smart way.
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Task 2 - नमूना लेख
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