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The two line graphs show the changes in UK steel demand and employment in the steel industry between 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two line graphs show the changes in UK steel demand and employment in the steel industry between 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graphs illustrate how demand for steel and the employment of this industry change in UK from 1970 to 2000. Overall, the UK witnessed a downward trend in total demand and production for steel, whereas underwent the rising of import demand. Moreover, employment in steel industry climbed down in this period. To specify, in 1970, total demand for steel was 200 thousands tonnes, about 4000 tonnes higher than UK steel production. In the following years, both demand and supply for steel experienced a decrease in numbers, but in a different pattern. While the steel production fell steadily, its demand dropped slightly from 1970 to 1980, then decreased sharply in the next 10 years and remained stable until 2000 at 100000 tonnes, about 3000 tonnes higher than its supply in 2000. Besides that, the number of UK steel imports started with a small number in 1970 and then went constantly up to 70000 tonnes in 2000. Moreover, UK workforce in this field also fell down over the time examined. There were 50000 employees in 1970, the highest number recorded in this period. Then the number of wokers fell sharply in the next 20 years before remain stable at 18000 people in 2000.

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