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In this day and age, seniors often choose approach take a year after graduated in high school so that relax myself as well as prepare everything beginning studying university. However, in my perspective, choosing take a year gap by students bring some positive but it cause a few negative. ＋In addition, I partly agree with statement above, which is going to be discussed in this essay.

On the one hand, by relaxing myself after finishing school play a significant role in life, which means that students feeling comfortable after studied time stress with travel anywhere with our family so they are need time ready for study university. For example, people can join trip in order to enjoy moment and boost energy effectively like tricking, tourism or sleeping at house reset our brains. As the result, taking a gap year bring an experience very excited and attracted.

On the other hand, take a gap year also play an important role in shape mindset for everyone, which means that people can become more lazy when they feel tired and delay everything their never make. For instance, when students spend too much relaxed myself they not only nervous about the future but also loss of the motivation.＋

＋In conclusion, choosing take a gap year not only very excited but also bring new experienced on account of seniors can relax myself and ready for new journey. Meanwhile, students continue studying university is better because the more hardworking the more people develop become. In my opinion, people should balance between studying and relaxing so that they don’t affect by stress.