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Nowadays, many people argue that students should complete their high school before doing something else. From my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion, because these days students cannot find any jobs without a high school diploma.

The strong argument for my opinion is that if students focus on working part time jobs, they can not focus on their studies in school and they can lose university places. When students spend all their time working to earn money, they can not focus on their traditional studies in high school and can not gain good exams. So that in the exam to pass in the universities, they can not pass the exam and in the bad way, they can not do any high-income in the future.

The next argument is that if students focus on their studies they can have many offers high-income in big companies in the site they want. When students complete their high school,if they want to learn higher, they can study in universities and study about their career they want to do in the future. And with the support in the course of universities and skills they train in the universities they gain valuable knowledge about their career so that they can have many offers high-incomes in big companies both domestics or international. For example, students who finish their high school and do not want study in universities, they can choose learn foreign language and a diploma about tour guide, they can offers in companies about tour in Vietnam to help many foreign people know more about traditional in Vietnam. On the other hand, they can travel to many heritage sites and have high-income if they hardworking.＋

In conclusion, I totally argue with that opinion, if students focus on their studies, they can have many careers and also they can do anything they like when they finish all their studies in high school or universities.