+In contemporary society, there has been increasingly old people losing the ability of woking, therefore they could not generate incomes to manage their lifes. +Because of that, some people believe that younger family members should be in charge of physically, mentallt or financially supporting their older members. In my perspectives, I partly agree with this viewpoint because this demonstrates the gratefulness and love of the young. But to supporting holistically, I think the government should implement several policies to enhance the lives of the older people without good well-being and finance.+
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SAMPLE 1: If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to work after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. What extent do you agree or disagree?
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SAMPLE 1: If old people are no longer physically, mentally or financially able to work after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. What extent do you agree or disagree?
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On the one hand, it is literally reasonable that the younger memebers should have responsibility to look after their another family member. Because every person is nursed and educated by the incomes and love of grandparents and parents, taking care of the close members is needed to express the gratefulness and love.+ Moreover, the citizens caring and looking after their family will generrate their future generations possesing love, inclusivity and gratefulness, not only foster a happy family bit also a inclusive and developed society.+ On the other hand, merely young people being responsible for financially support and taking care of their family members is not enough, because the young people could not able to pay off for their family members’ daily lifes. This is reason why the provison of amenities and financial support of the government is crucial. For example, the government could construct additional buildings to curb illnesses and provide accomodations for old people without the working ability.+
Conclusion
+In conclusion, it is undeniable that the young should support and take care of their old family member because of the former care and education of the elder and to show the gratefulness and love, contributing the inclusive and grateful future generations. Additionally, the support from the government is essential to enhance the old citizens’ living qualities.
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