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Nowadays, sports stars can earn a great deal of money from advertising expensive sporting goods and other products. What problems might this cause? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, sports stars can earn a great deal of money from advertising expensive sporting goods and other products. What problems might this cause? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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It is true that famous athletes can earn substantial incomes by endorsing expensive sporting goods and products. While this trend has certain benefits, it may cause several problems. From my point of view, its advantages are surpassed by some negative consequences, making it a detrimental development overall.

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One major problem is that fans, especially young people, always try to imitate their favourite sporting celebrities. When athletes promote expensive shoes, clothing or equipments, they may believe that owning these products will enhance their performance, improve their appearance and make them look more fashionable. As a result, they will persuade their parents to buy items which are beyond the family's budget. This may lead to their overspending and unnecessary financial burden on households. Another issue is that sports stars may be keen on commercial activities than on their sports careers. Since advertisement contracts offer enormous financial rewards, some professional sportperson will receive lucrative endorsement deals from global brands,spend more time taking part in events and promoting products than concentrating on training and competitions. Therefore, the quality of their performance may decline and they will fail to serve as role models for young people who admire their dedication and sportmanship. A classic demonstration of this is Adriano, a former Brazilian footballer. He experience a significant decrease in performance after regularly involved in advertisement deals and his celebrity lifestyle instead of focusing on career.

Although this trend allows companies to increase sale and athletes to make a huge profit, I think these advantages are outweighed by its drawbacks. The increasing expense of expensive branded products can encourage overconsumption and materialism, meaning that success is closely linked to wealth and luxury. Such values can harmfully affect society, especially the young.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the popularity of well-known athletes in advertising can cause financial pressure for customer and take sports stars ' responsibility away from their careers. Therefore, I believe it is a detrimental development despite its economic positive sides.

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