Nowadays, celebrities occupy a unique position in soicety due to their prevalence and influence, however, it leads to amount of pressure they might face while living constantly in the public eyes 24/7. While some people argue that the lack of privacy is the unavoidable consequence of fame, i believe that celebrities deserve privacy rights, even though a degree of press scrutiny is still needed.
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Should celebrities enjoy privacy from the press? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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Should celebrities enjoy privacy from the press? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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On the one hand, being famous does not mean someone needs to give up fundamental rights. Public figures all are human they still own families, relationships, medical heath issues,.. It is not fair if people seems the lack of celebrities' personnal space is reasonable just because millions of audiences know them. LIving under public eyes in a long time not only causes stressful-related mental health like: depression, anxiety disorders,.. but also impacts negatively on their daily life. For instance, photographing celebrity's children can make them the targets of media attracion because of their parents' fame, which can prevent them from enjoying a normal childhood and minor their developments.
On the other hand, if the public figures choose to update their private life on social media platforms they might accept that some criticisms caused. By uploading details about their relationships, daily rountines,.. they draw pulic attention, which leads to different comments and opinions.+ However, it is unessceray to overupdate news of celebrities, press scrutiny still needed. Since the influence of the pulic figures they need to be more responsible of their behaviours, attitudes,.. especially who have numberous fans in the young ages.+
Conclusion
+In conclusion, no matter how big fame of the celebrity is they still deserves the fundameatl right to protect their own peace. However, press should be needed to hold their accountable
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